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Old 2007-06-28, 23:18
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Frozen soul

i got bored so i wrote this

Frozen Soul


The rain continues to fall
The trees sway in the wind
The moon is as blue as the lake
Dead do the trees become
Dead do they fall
A layer of mist clouds my vision
The wolves turn to the lake
I follow
I am overcome with thirst
The wolves do not drink but wait
I drink the water
I begin to feel the cold


Frozen soul
The only pain I can not show
Soon I will be frozen from the inside out
Drink the lake water and you will find out


The wolves wait for you to freeze completely
Then when the ice has melted
You shall be devoured
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Old 2007-06-29, 09:08
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Quite good. I enjoyed that.

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