Just wanted to sea what you guys thought of his lyrics.

"Weaver of Vitality"

In place where spirits claim to lend a helping hand
but just a taste of this forces me to reprimand
my thoughts, my conscience, my every triggering memory
where every flashing image ruins my self harmony
A blankened mind I seek, this blackened mind is weak
and exclamation comes with every word I speak
do these overwhelming words not reach your ears?
often i speak what you tend not to hear...

You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies

In this vulnerable state I've been pushed and cast into
you're capable of breaching and walking through
and the fewest days go by, but I just can't count them
I can't simplify my efforts and just go without then
I never seem to fade it's true.. and when I imagine you..
a blurred vision begins to sneak into my sight
so I close my eyes to eliminate every shade of light...

You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies

Maybe I should just absorb your advice
wallow and roam a fakened paradise
but I'm too fucking restless to settle this catastrophic
moment you reap because you seem to feed off it
and shadows return to surface my flaws
covering and shining down on my fangs and claws
and you're feeding off it..testing my monstrosity
consuming my misery and claiming the ability...

My flaws catch you're eye, and you're feeding off them..
my every sin rests in your palms, you feed off them..
you're reaping their exile, surfacing every vengeful action..
and you're feeding off...them..

Chaotic and merciless emotion endured
the darkened water just seeps through the floor
the sound of viscious groans loud as can be
every thought remaining held is catching up to me
this glee ascends, breaking open the shell
of every built up parasite..descending this hell..

Wedding two...weaving one...
one from the other..only one unravels..
wedding two...decieving one..
one from the other..only one fades away..
wedding two...depriving one..
one from the other..only one walks away..
wedding two...destroying one..
one from the other..only one smiles today..

You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies
You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies
You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies
You cry...black water..
and every shade of black is a layer of lies

There you go.

That's a prohibition against posting the lyrics of bands you like, which are copyrighted, not against posting those by somebody you know and who'd allow you to do so.

sucks

A 'one word critic'... I think we have just witnessed the beginning of a brilliant writers career

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