2007-06-21, 12:03
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Escaped From A Dream
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Escaped From A Dream
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I walk beyond the edges of settlement,
into a green expanse.
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Forever shifting veils of ignorance,
perceptions caged in a skein of vectors,
of human purpose,
an impossible depth to the caged,
is the vision without their directions.
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To see through the art,
that reflects a soul's encasement,
a liberation unto,
what is before, after and beyond,
to be escaped,
from a dream.
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To have let go of what happens to be,
and to have touched what is,
is to be escaped from a dream.
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To peer closely at a phrase,
and still not see sentient volition,
is to be escaped from a dream.
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To see appellations float above natures,
to be escaped from a dream.
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Don't know why I didn't submit these already. Named my second composition this.
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2007-06-21, 17:05
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Mar 2006
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i love it, i definitelyhad to read it a second time, but i love lyrics like these stuff beyond human senses, cosmos, etc.
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2007-06-21, 23:10
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Thanks! Expect more from me then in the future!
And well, there is more to this universe than humans and their weird ideas.
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2007-06-22, 15:25
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Sep 2005
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Great job.
I really enjoyed that.
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2007-06-25, 19:35
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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Haha, I was a bit apprehensive to post them for some reason. Guess I was wrong.
Any more thoughts? I like thoughts...
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2007-06-27, 22:40
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Okay.
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Join Date: Nov 2004
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Excellent I love it, great work man. Cheers to you!
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Originally Posted by CompelledToLacerate
God, the Japanese are so weird. This HAS to be the long term effects of the atom bombs. No one is that weird on purpose.
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Originally Posted by Gomli
The slams in that song always kill me. First time I heard that song I was like "Too much heaviness - brain collapse" but now I could murder my family to that one
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2007-06-28, 17:01
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Legio Draconorum Orkian
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good. i enjoyed that!
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2007-06-28, 23:12
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Thanks, guys!
Now that we have a Compositions forum, I may post the music I was gonna put these on top of. Although, I'm likely gonna record it for my EP during the summer, so I may keep it concealed. I need to finish bass and drums anyway, and then vocal arrangement.
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