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2007-05-31, 06:46
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Rate my vocals
Yo, I'm nate. I'm 16, Here's my one of my songs. Tell me what you think of the vocals, and the whole song. Ive only been screaming 3 months so i dont no if they suck or not, i like em tho.
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2007-05-31, 06:53
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wheres the song?
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2007-05-31, 07:03
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Originally Posted by SuspendedByTheThroat
wheres the song?
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2007-05-31, 07:25
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2007-05-31, 19:46
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do you want a completely honest answer?..
it sounds like you drank a bunch of milk and talked into a really bad microphone.
and the rest of it sounds like random metalcore riffs from other songs.
it dos'nt sound like screaming, it dos'nt sound like death metal vocals, black metal vocals, or even hardcore vocals.
but dont get me wrong, good luck to you, you just need to actualy have some air flow through, not just head.
reminds me of these little middleschoolers who made a band around here.. hah.
Last edited by SuspendedByTheThroat : 2007-05-31 at 19:49.
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2007-05-31, 20:17
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Metalcore sucks..... 
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2007-05-31, 21:40
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well i have no idea how to actually scream right but that works best for me for now.
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2007-05-31, 21:58
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I hate this whole, "I scream" business. Metalcore fruits... You mean you do vocals.
And those riffs are boring. And your vocals need work. Try using some air instead of bubbles in the back of your throat.
Last edited by Unanything : 2007-05-31 at 22:03.
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2007-05-31, 23:20
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like we've all said, actually put some air in there.
look up tutorials and various posts on this forum about using the diaphragm to push air.
head voice is never good, in singing too, not good.
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2007-06-01, 00:04
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alrity thanx man ill try that. i dont think the riffs are boring i find that alot f death metals boring because the vocals are just constent boring lows in all of it. but like the faceless there good. and alot of other ones but i just cant get into the other stuff.
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2007-06-01, 00:22
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i'm not pleased man not pleased
but the music was cool
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2007-06-01, 01:53
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Thank you!! Yeah as for the screaming thats as good as i can do now! Ill get it real good eventually tho hopefully.
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2007-06-01, 05:00
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Ehhh...............1.4/1,000,000
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2007-07-19, 22:19
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I think this is a good written song it has a nice structure.
The vocals would work better for me in a different context, like in a repetative droning black metal track. The song they're in now calls for the Trivium-esque style vocals.
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2007-07-20, 06:21
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Judging by your influences, I guess this is what should be expected. You're only 16, so 6-7 years from now you will look back on this and laugh after you have (hopefully) moved onto something bigger. Good luck, and keep an open mind.
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