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Old 2007-05-19, 17:08
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You Will Die

I'm no advocate of revenge
But sometimes the sweetest things are too hard to resist
And with your credentials in such a topic -
Oh how it feels to topple a master
Your apology was heartfelt enough
With all the convictions of a broken lover
But behind shattered mirrors
All the contradictions of heart breaker
So to spit it all in your face
To regurgitate backwashed hate
I have eaten your world whole
And I hope the stains stay with you forever
As a constant reminder of the one that got away.
 
Old 2007-05-19, 18:46
Enoch-666
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Lots of real cool anger in this one. and some interesting ideas as well. the stains thing was cool.
 
Old 2007-05-19, 20:10
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Yeah, I agree. It was trumped up from regular justice done.
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Old 2007-05-28, 07:50
Enoch-666
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Infinity
I'm no advocate of revenge
But sometimes the sweetest things are too hard to resist
And with your credentials in such a topic -
Oh how it feels to topple a master
Your apology was heartfelt enough
With all the convictions of a broken lover
But behind shattered mirrors
All the contradictions of heart breaker
So to spit it all in your face
To regurgitate backwashed hate
I have eaten your world whole
And I hope the stains stay with you forever
As a constant reminder of the one that got away.



I could not advocate revenge
but the hardness of sweet things excites me..
I'll never credential the topic of mirrors
but im almost totaly shattered..
i don't appology heart felt convictions
but i can topple a master..
Ill never contradict heart breakers
but i could just spit in your face..
I dont visualise monsters
but that is how they will take me..
I could not be in the allways
but you could not give me the answers..
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