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Old 2007-05-18, 17:38
Enoch-666
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One pound trigger pull

The click and clack of the living sprockets
grinding fiercely on know-it-allism
sprockets within a living body
sprockets causing motion
sprockets causing my deviant chemical trigger
to a one pound trigger pull

causing language
causing change
causing this

the wrench and churn of the grinding lives
lives passing freely through forums
lives within a living grinder
lives causing my deviant chemical trigger
to a one pound trigger pull

guarding moderation
guarding reason
guarding molded plastic buttons

the whurr and spank of steel on bone
blurring freshly on bleeding knees
crawling nicely
bleeding importance
blood causing my deviant chemical trigger
to a one pound trigger pull

bleeding ideas
bleeding freely
bleeding clay...
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Old 2007-05-19, 20:38
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I did not expect the bleeding clay. Clay is pretty impenatreble. (sp) At first I wasn't sure about the repetitions, but I think given the sounds they create they might be a perfect image. I heard lots of rough gears grinding and working even though there is friction. The shots were punctuation of maybe one tooth missing from the cogs. Metaphoric and noisy piece.
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Old 2007-05-19, 21:57
Enoch-666
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Thanks. I just gleened it from the "Immune to smiles" thread ..deviant chemical trigger seemed logical at the time
 
Old 2007-05-20, 05:11
Enoch-666
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Clay being a medium of expression.. blood being a medium of ... exchange...in the face of it, this means...nothing..im sorry.
 
Old 2007-05-20, 06:03
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LOL dude where are you from?
 
Old 2007-05-21, 21:56
Enoch-666
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I did not expect the bleeding clay. Clay is pretty impenatreble. (sp) At first I wasn't sure about the repetitions, but I think given the sounds they create they might be a perfect image. I heard lots of rough gears grinding and working even though there is friction. The shots were punctuation of maybe one tooth missing from the cogs. Metaphoric and noisy piece.
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Yeah I didnt see the repetition, as my perspective is unbalanced by my knowing what I was going to write...like ear rot only with paper. I will perform a repetdecomy and post the weirdness on this thread.
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