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2007-05-16, 15:45

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Regret

No matter how you cry.
No matter how you try to turn clock backwards.
The sins committed can't be changed.

You said stop.
Still, he just wanted more.
You know he deserved it.
Yet you regret it.

Rotting corpse hanging in the empty room.
A new life growing inside you.

No matter how you cry.
No matter how you try to turn clock backwards.
The sins committed can't be changed.

No matter how you cry.
No matter how you try to deny it.
The sins committed can't be changed.

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Last edited by Theoldman : 2007-05-17 at 13:52.

2007-05-17, 03:24

Infinity

Life is pain.

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2007-05-17, 07:11

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Edit: btw, added one line there I forgot yesterday.

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2007-05-17, 13:16

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In the "Rotting corpse" couplet, why did you change to "me" in that line? Was it the "you" briefly making an appearance there?

Pretty wild piece. It neither said too little or too much, but left imagination to think up all the details.

Nice to see you write here, too.

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2007-05-17, 13:51

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Haha, sorry. It's supposed to be "you". And thanks for your comment.

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