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2007-04-25, 15:32
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
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Hmm, I think it was okay taken in the right context. If you don't have anything to relate it to or expect more of a storyline then yeah, it would disappoint, but I think it has a pulse to it and resolution.
If it was to be a song it would be a good "We Have Heaven" Yes type song between songs with some repetition of lines in other pieces throughout a concept.
Think outside the box.
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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