2007-04-25, 15:10
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Okay, I read even though I don't know who the hell you're taling about and there's too many for me to bother looking up. I thought it was intriguing until I got to the last stanza and then it totally got destroyed to me. The infamous "c" word. You might be creating something there, but it's still not flying as far as my liking. The rest is really good.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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