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2007-04-07, 21:28
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3 Word Burst
Just something spontaneous when a friend said the title.
"3 Word Burst"
Close the door
Open the window
Hit the deck
Kiss my ass
Take a number
I don't know
Are you pregnant
Where's the beef
Pan's boiling over
Dinner is done
Freddie's fried again
Want another one
There's no use
Feel the heat
Pimp my ride
Same ole song
Here we go
Are we there
Did you cry
Will I live
The phone's ringing
Gonna answer that
It's too big
Heaven help us
BJH
4-7-2007
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-04-09, 00:49
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What the hell? haha Intresting idea writing what just comes to mind in 3 word bursts.
Reminds me of how i'm thinking about making a "journal" where for one week everytime a new thought comes into my head i quickly jot it down, like 3 words or 4, just enough to have the jist of what hte idea is. After a week looking back and maybe putting it in a database counting how many times reoccuring ideas pop up and seeing any other patterns.
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2007-04-09, 12:45
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tm, that sounds like a fun project and you might learn something about your own reflections doing it.
I posted this a couple other places and one idea was to group things a little differently. I played around with that a little yesterday, but I'm not done with it yet.
In the other place, the one that inspired the idea made a great contribution as I suggested anyone that wanted to to continue with more of their own 3 word bursts. Anyone want to go for it, be my guest.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-04-09, 20:51
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Location: England
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Victim
Wash hands first.
In the bowl.
Face is second.
Waters gone cold.
Watch the mirror.
Brought to halt.
Lips and eyes.
Cleansed with salt.
Stale and sterile.
Start to wonder.
Same old tasks.
Are taking longer.
Harder to clean.
The invisible dirt.
Water can't reach.
Places that hurt.
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Last edited by JAMF : 2007-04-10 at 20:36.
Reason: Fixed to 3 words each line.
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2007-04-09, 22:35
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you strayed away from the 3 word formula a few times there
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2007-04-25, 15:26
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That was pretty cool. I tried to get something rearranged with mine, but it just wasn't grabbing me anymore.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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