
2007-04-06, 20:39
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Stripped Away
Sort of blues acoustic meets Alice in Chains.
With this one I was trying to get away from metaphorical philosophical Death Metal lyrics and more literally into what I was thinking. Hence the simple vocabulary and simple rhymes.
Stripped Away
Verse 1
I found a way to keep the pain outside.
It's called hate and you should give it a try sometime.
But it's never like I ever had the choice.
I was never the one to stand up and raise my voice.
Bridge
But when I look back and wonder,
How all it could have been.
Verse 2
I found a way to try and kid myself.
Trickied into thinking I need no one else.
I can't believe the way I was back then.
Sat back and waiting for the crows to land.
Bridge
But when I look back and wonder,
How it all could have been.
Chorus
Wishing I could be like you.
Wish that I could trust like you too.
Think of all the things I could do.
It's hard for me to drift away when all my life's been stripped away by you.
Instrumental
Verse 3
I found a way to filter out the lies.
It gets me feeling good but at what price.
Don't try to tell me all with be okay.
Cos I don't see you trying to live my way.
Bridge
And I look back in anger,
How it all should have been.
Chorus X 2
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Last edited by JAMF : 2007-04-06 at 20:42.
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2007-04-06, 22:00
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Post-whore
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I gotta say dude thats some of the best lyrical work i've seen lately.
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2007-04-06, 23:44
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Very AIC sounding. Loved the crows line. That was a great image loaded with metaphor. Really cool flow to it, too.
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