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2007-03-17, 06:15
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Mentally Defective
Slime
Worthless
Child of the inbred
Another pile of protein
Nothingness
Brutal violence
An ancient seed of barbarians
Your life means nothing
Gone in a breath
A reproduction of vile
sadistic trash
Your empty threats
are nothingness
A waste of DNA
A waste of flesh
A scab on society
An iron mesh
DO you see?
No one will remember
DO you hear?
Nothing but a joke
Do you feel?
Cold and worthless
Do you know
I'll tear your heart from your...
chest
Pathetic
Getting off from
.........beating on the weak
Sadistic
Getting off from
..........embracing your defeat
COLD
You will never
be
remember
You
are
nothing but
a
slave...
(((For those of you whose opinions I respect (you know who you are) this is much more crude than anything I would normally post. Give it a chance. I didn't like it at first either.)))
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CompelledToLacerate because of his sweaty balls and Simpsons dissing.
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2007-03-17, 07:57
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Life is pain.
Banned
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after your heavy criticism of my stuff, im glad this turned out to be far less than perfect.
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2007-03-17, 12:12
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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The only thing I could bitch about was the nothingness in both occasions. I think you can come up with something besides that there. It's okay sometimes, but it just seemed not quite right in this.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-03-17, 18:23
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Senior Metalhead
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after your heavy criticism of my stuff, im glad this turned out to be far less than perfect.
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Yeah, but I wrote this when I was drunk.
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CompelledToLacerate because of his sweaty balls and Simpsons dissing.
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2007-03-17, 19:58
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i agree with LBXXX, words like hopelessness or nothingness, never really worked for me
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are you telling us that you have 4 boobs...2 small and 2 bigs
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2007-03-17, 20:20
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I'll agree to much repitition on those words...
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“Remember to live, eat, sleep and breathe music for the mind, play from your heart and never be swayed by the current trends.” ~Rusty Cooley
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2007-03-17, 21:00
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Originally Posted by Ludd
Yeah, but I wrote this when I was drunk.
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SO. FUCKING. WHAT!?
'Your sample sucks'
'Yeah we know but it was recorded when the drummer broke his back, the guitarist was missing 2 strings, the vocalist had terrible diarrhea, ...'
At LEAST fix it when you're sober, or just don't post it yet if it isn't 'as good as it could be', what you insinuate. Jesus bitch Christ.
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Aosoth - New album III out now on Agonia Recs
Epoch - bass, guitars, drums, MetaStasizing out asap
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Tetianblood? ... Well, 'Necrosemen' to you too. Twat.
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2007-03-17, 21:06
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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The first nothingness could be replaced with just the word "garbage." The second with "your threats are empty. " If you want to change those. Take them or leave them. It's just ideas.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-03-17, 22:25
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Post-whore
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
The first nothingness could be replaced with just the word "garbage." The second with "your threats are empty. " If you want to change those. Take them or leave them. It's just ideas.
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words that go great with garbage like putrid, infested, low,
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Originally Posted by BOB_ZE_METALLEU
are you telling us that you have 4 boobs...2 small and 2 bigs
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2007-03-19, 10:04
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New Blood
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I didn't mind it, it's a simple writ...nothing else positive or negative to say.
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2007-03-21, 21:30
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Senior Metalhead
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"At LEAST fix it when you're sober, or just don't post it yet if it isn't 'as good as it could be', what you insinuate. Jesus bitch Christ"
I now dedicate this pile of crap to your whining ass.
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