an older piece i found laying around on the hard drive... very long story behind it and actually its been changed a few times...


intro:
YOU CAME TO ME
WANTING TO WALK IN ON MY DREAMS...
MORE MY FAULT THEN ANYTHING...


You put it all out
for anyone and everything
you came to me
just for love getting lost in degradation
but i let you in for copulation


prolific not in anyway
this life we were held hand in hand
but you slowly faded away
into the void of this place

how do you feel?
no love just a blind ride....
empty cirest as your skin touches
all your degraded feelings


As you fall into sleep
In another's bed
Do you finally see?
No more falling anymore
No more falling into anyones arms........

pale face with dark eyes
no love for you tonight
this nothing you will always seek
no more
your life is bleak

Like a flower without scent.....
you are

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I think the best like was the imagery created by the flower without scent part. Beauty on the outside, but not much else to offer.
The rest had some good lines and some really forced or generic sounding lines. You could dress this up a bit and it wouldn't be bad. I think that first verse would be a keeper without changing it.

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