Names of the impressions of the people
brought together by a generic
classroom activity
of which
they most likely
had no willpower to will
together yet they were lightly entertained.

Nonetheless together they are seen
their hands are seen together
on a glossy, quite large
display displaying
a certain community
presumed to be individual
by their hand placement methods, ironic.

Luminescent paint painting images
and subliminal messages
we will together
reconciliation
messaging to us
the supposed strength
which this certain community holds.

Thirty six hands, a perfect square
of perfect proportions
which of perfect
perfection
these individuals
overcome, by being human;
and as expected mass greed amounts as a hand is claimed by five different names.

I was wondering about the repetitions, but I see they're consistent so I'm going to assume that's a tie to the subject matter. I think some of it could be tightened up a little bit, but I really enjoyed this a lot. That last thought made me laugh. That was too amusing.

Nice to see a refreshing bit like this here.

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hard for me to understand
when i get it, ill post back w/ crits

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