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2007-02-23, 01:45
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Death Is Too Cliche
Unmotivated, unwilling
Souless, rotting
No urge, no wanting
Content with wasting
Death is too cliche
No uniqueness in forfeit
Stifled potential lost in the night
Salvation dormant in the light
Erosion of the spirit
Soul stupified by degredation
A reason needed to rise
The cure for this constipation
Emotion is life
To love, to seethe
Passion drives the crimson
To care is to breathe
Death is too cliche
No uniqueness in forfeit
Stifled potential lost in the night
Salvation dormant in the light
Turn to a god for guidance in need
Brethren and kin support and feed
Opportunities are the mountains in the plains
With the absence of care, apathy remains
Human bodies, crude matter in life
Flesh as frail as the will, thick for the knife
False warmth radiates from the veins
Easy to break, no challenge to end
Weakness, falure, share no relation
Shame in surrender, give in to fail
Being weak is the motivation
Strengthen the flaws to conclude the trail
Willing is to last
Willing is to last
Willing is to last
Willing is to last
Motivated, willing
Soulful, growing
All urge, all wanting
Gratified with making
Death is too cliche
No uniqueness in forfeit
Stifled potential lost in the night
Salvation dormant in the light
Life is the prominent way
Happiness found, no more delay
Potential found and brought out of the night
Salvation obtained in the heat of the light
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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2007-02-23, 02:50
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were getting some where 
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are you telling us that you have 4 boobs...2 small and 2 bigs
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2007-02-23, 05:22
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I used a thesaurus this time. 
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Originally Posted by Amadeus
It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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2007-02-23, 11:45
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I liked this stem to stern.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-02-23, 19:33
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Flowers don't have sterns, and boats don't have stems. What are you thinking of?
Thanks.
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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2007-02-23, 21:32
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Senior Metalhead
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Big improvement. Good job.
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CompelledToLacerate because of his sweaty balls and Simpsons dissing.
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2007-02-23, 22:15
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Thank you! Oh!
"Constipation" is one of the biggest words there. Lord help me if you got that from the thesaurus. Did you write music for it?
EDIT: For the song. Not the constipation.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-02-23, 22:28
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Thank you! Oh!
"Constipation" is one of the biggest words there. Lord help me if you got that from the thesaurus. Did you write music for it?
EDIT: For the song. Not the constipation.
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Constipation is an everyday occurance for me (diet sucks), so I needed no thesaurus for it.
No music to it, but I am planning to make it.
.... and music for constipation? Hmmm.... a form of musical therapy for the bowel movement impaired individuals. I like it.
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
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2007-02-26, 15:25
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CTL, not bad man. It's interesting to see a calmer side to this forum, amidst arguing over crazy things like EMG's and plectrum-juggling. I have to say, decent quote you have on there. It's been a long long time since I've written, I think I might drag out some of my horrible writings from when I first started, they're about 10 years old and I think everyone will get a good laugh |
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