This one is based on the first tombstones made from lime stone..in addition, talks about the dissappearance of Christ..


Casket of Christ.
Burial of human remains..
the final resting place!
Find his rotting corpse!
Nowhere to be found..
you will...rest in peace!

Splintered bones, withering souls
bodies scavaged for a pleasant feast
Cast the ritual
deciding one's fate
your final burial..will make haste!!!

Rotting..bodies
Exhilerating..Stench
Teeth decayed..
Eyes full of pus and maggots..
Forever trapped in their ossuary..
Diseased, brittled skulls..in dismay
Tortured alive...witnessed..
To pay the price!

Soul of your dying..sins...
His first tombstone to dismay..
Where is his corpse..
This day!!.
Where does his life
Resemble...the human race!

Open the casket of Christ..
Nothing left to reveal
Only his shroud lay about
No body to conceal..

Ossuary, thy place of death
Only to exceed in death, his soul is lost
Cremation is a question in the mind
Ask yourself is this the right place and time?

All hope is lost
Death is no longer at hand
His soul gone forever!
Never again..
To return..
Welcome to..
Eternal Void!!!.

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Sounds cool A bit lengthy which is good

The third part I've read too many times. The rest was pretty good though.

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Lbxxx..yeah, the third part is just explaining some of torture those people have been through to get where they are. In my case there, its simply an extra part of the song..when I get the chance, all of yous will hear these tunes and how they go..

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I like the idea; I just think you could be a little subtler with the imagery. Good for a first draft.

Your avatar picture is hilarious.

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