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2007-01-26, 15:40
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Senior Metalhead
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Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Sweden , Gothenburg
Posts: 256
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Nova Of The Deadsky
War,Hate and despair, this vital fate i can not bear.
I can see it in your eyes the fragments of war, you will never
forget,never be the same.
My misery i cant describe,my horrors of life.the darkest sky.
This structure can not stand anymore,soon it will fade, leave this
world behind.
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2007-01-26, 16:00
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Blunt for sure. It's got a heavy voiced sound to it. Kind of cliche in idea though. I think it could be a build up to something more detailed. Maybe about the mental tortures one feels in a war situation like post traumatic stress.
Btw, I loved the title. That was catchy.
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-01-26, 16:03
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Quantum.
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Posts: 2,149
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For goodness sake, don't waste that title like that.
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Listening to Cannibal Corpse and cutting trees with a chainsaw, now that's metal
"He preferred the hard truth over his dearest illusion. That, is the heart of science."
- Carl Sagan
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