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Old 2007-01-26, 01:53
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Vivid Dream

"Vivid Dream"

Your grip tightens invisibly
Holding the strings around my heart
Soft spoken, knowing what gets to me
Time and time again
Smooth as silk and twice as treasured
Pennies for my thoughts

Like a vivid dream that reoccurs
Day and night it calls across the clouds
Feeds a hunger, quells a thirst
Builds ideas, dashes creativity

I don't know where to start
Top or bottom? Maybe from the side?
Maybe from the middle working either way seperately or all at once
Every snowflake touching my hair reminds me of your finger tips
The soft falling daydream filtered vision
Every pine bough releasing it's white hold in a flurry to the ground
Like strands of hair tumbling down shoulders
Down curves
Down your waist

Close your eyes
Drift away
Seas calling
Seas calling
Waves calling

BJH
1/25/2007
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Old 2007-01-26, 20:38
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Nice imagery. I like these lines:

Every snowflake touching my hair reminds me of your finger tips

&

Every pine bough releasing it's white hold in a flurry to the ground
Like strands of hair tumbling down shoulders
Down curves
Down your waist


Good stuff.
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