The Frenzied Frey

What tomorrow knowns, a mystery
A fire that sits glistening
Upon the reaping fields of today
One thing's for sure, a guarantee
Within this hive of buzzing bees
The some will die, while others live and stay

Puppets on a silver string
That lays within most anything
Are we they? They are we?
Or is it you, or is it me?
Schizophrentic fortune heirs
To an estate for which no one cares
Am I to blame? Are you to blame?
In the end it ends the same

Take my hand my fallen leader
And let us be the bush's beaters
And we will reign, as two as one
And run until our time is done
Tomorrow's rise could take our lives
So let us live before we die
"Before we die, before we die,
My life for you!" the masses cry

Come the pauper and aristocrat
Both to join the frenzied frey
Next to the patriot and anarchist
The terrified millions play
A swirling sea of vicious creatures
Its feeding time in this zoo
Where only predators are featured
Only beasts like me and you

Frightened sheep in wolfskin coat
That snarl, bleat, and rock the boat
Me, me, me, me, me, me, me
The cowards claim blindness, the blind to see
The scourge of man and God alike
These fallen kings of fallen reichs
The king is dead, long live the king
So let the fallen angels sing

"Godless monsters, human kind
Fragile shells over broken minds
I'm told I think, therefore I am
Called by many names, I answer to man"

Come the pauper and aristocrat
Both join in the frenzied frey
Next to the patriot and anarachist
The terrifed millions play
A swirling sea of vicious creatures
Its feeding time in this zoo
Where only predators are featured
Only beasts like me and you

2007 STAIKY Music

Whadda' think?

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very nice post man i enjoyed this one quite abit.....
" Tomorrow's rise could take our lives
So let us live before we die
"Before we die, before we die,
My life for you!" the masses cry"




awesome lines man

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I tried reading it last night and couldn't focus with my headache, but I wanted to give it another shot. I liked this. Your imagery was pretty cool and the flow was slow to me, but that could from a death metal edge or a different style of song all together.
I like questions in pieces so that was attractive to me. It draws the reader into the situation I think.
Good read.

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Thanks alot, both of you.

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Quality lyrics, love 'em.

One thing that I'd like to point out though,



I think you could do without the 2nd "and".



I dunno, that might just be me being weird, but I think it would flow a bit more nicely.

Cheers

Yeah, I think that may have been a typo, but yeah, that would be better.

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