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2006-12-23, 22:33
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"Small Town Girl"
"Small Town Girl"
by Jacob Fitzlaff
12/23/2006
With a baby, in her arms.
And dope in her pocket.
She's on the corner selling her story.
Just like a prophet.
She's a small town girl.
Sick with castastophe.
Blonde hair, and ready lips.
Her only god is money.
With a baby, in her arms.
And a hand in your pocket.
She's on the corner selling her body
Just to make a profit.
She never had her day.
She never really lived.
But's she's all the way alive now.
When's she covered in sin.
With a baby, in her arms.
And a hand in your pocket.
She's on the corner writing this story.
Just for a profit.
She's got a baby in her arms.
And dope in her pocket.
She's on the corner selling her body.
Just like prophet.
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2006-12-24, 03:22
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Life is pain.
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2006-12-24, 05:39
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Originally Posted by BOB_ZE_METALLEU
are you telling us that you have 4 boobs...2 small and 2 bigs
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2006-12-24, 17:52
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Pretty basic material for you, but that's not a bad thing necessarily. I got more of a reggae feel from it.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-12-29, 20:10
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I have been listening to Bob Marley a lot recently, but this piece stemmed from listening to Courtney Love and Hole. Call it a tribute 
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2008-12-13, 06:44
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Not to raise this from the graveyard, but a friend of mine recently took my lyrics and recorded them, and I think she did a wonderful job. Check it out at
http://www.myspace.com/jacilynn9
Song titled "Small Town Girl"
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2008-12-14, 00:22
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I'm loving her sound. She did a really cool job on this song. I've listened to almost all her songs now and that's something I don't do too often. There were a few changes to your lyric. Was that your doing or hers?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2008-12-14, 04:29
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Those were her changes. I really like what she has done with it. I've never written music for this piece but what she came up with is absolutely stunning.
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