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Shore

2006-12-15, 00:22

Pr0az

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Shore

So tired i begin to faint
Into past memories on this sea
Hearing echos of my past
Slowly as i breath
Thinking of everyone i ones knew
Hurdling back to those times
Times gone for good
Thinking of all those ive lost
Hearing their screams as they fall
As i hear a wave crash
Another memory comes ashore
Then a echo of thunder far off
A storm begins to rage
Memories i just can't take
Wake me up with embittered haste
As i look away from the corroded shore

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2006-12-15, 18:51

L,B'XXX

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I think a little polish on the rhythm and this could be quite cool. I liked the idea, but it seemed a little rough in places.

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2006-12-21, 03:03

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deathish, prog lyrics. I like prog lyrics, the trippy dream-like type

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