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2006-12-15, 00:22
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Join Date: Oct 2006
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Shore
So tired i begin to faint
Into past memories on this sea
Hearing echos of my past
Slowly as i breath
Thinking of everyone i ones knew
Hurdling back to those times
Times gone for good
Thinking of all those ive lost
Hearing their screams as they fall
As i hear a wave crash
Another memory comes ashore
Then a echo of thunder far off
A storm begins to rage
Memories i just can't take
Wake me up with embittered haste
As i look away from the corroded shore
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“Remember to live, eat, sleep and breathe music for the mind, play from your heart and never be swayed by the current trends.” ~Rusty Cooley
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2006-12-15, 18:51
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
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I think a little polish on the rhythm and this could be quite cool. I liked the idea, but it seemed a little rough in places.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-12-21, 03:03
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Candyland
Posts: 1,542
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deathish, prog lyrics. I like prog lyrics, the trippy dream-like type
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