|
2006-11-06, 01:59
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: CALIFORNIA
Posts: 134
|
|
|
Machines of War
Penetrate the battle front
Bloodshed begins
Thermo nuclear vindicators
Will clarify their sins
Malevolent rage
The untethered core
Demoralized
MACHINES OF WAR
Havoc-released
Carnage-hostilities
Machines-unleashed
Atomic-capabilities
Bolt of missles-Thrash down
Laying waste-To your town
Nation laid to waste
Death has been embraced
Malevolent rage
The untethered core
Demoralized
MACHINES OF WAR
Havoc-released
Carnage-hostilities
Machines-unleashed
Atomic-capabilities
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Wolfsherz
YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
|
|
|
2006-11-06, 04:14
|
 |
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 1,924
|
|
|
Pretty cool man.
Bolt of missles-Thrash down
Laying waste-To your town
Nation laid to waste
Death has been embraced
I think you might want to substitute waste for something else in the forth sentence. Seems like it being used above kind of makes it not flow right!
__________________
“Remember to live, eat, sleep and breathe music for the mind, play from your heart and never be swayed by the current trends.” ~Rusty Cooley
|
|
2006-11-06, 05:30
|
 |
Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 59
|
|
|
FUCKING AWESOME!
__________________
Jesus F***ing Christ. God is Dog spelled backwards.
|
|
2006-11-06, 21:30
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: CALIFORNIA
Posts: 134
|
|
|
thanks for the comments and ya im going to have to come up with a new line for the part you mentioned pr0az
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Wolfsherz
YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
|
|
|
2006-11-07, 04:08
|
 |
Slayer of dumb cunts
|
|
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Virginia Tech, Blacksburg, va
Posts: 3,622
|
|
|
Really seems like an 80s british oi punk song to me. Reads and sounds like it.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Darko
...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
|
About requiem. Aint it the truth... |
|
2006-11-07, 15:02
|
 |
Post-whore
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: providence
Posts: 1,863
|
|
|
thrash metal
__________________
Quote:
|
I fought for world titles in boxing, karate, I fought bar wars, street corners, most everything living and half the stuff dead,ain’t nobody bad, I know, I looked.......
|
|
|
2006-11-08, 00:07
|
 |
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
|
What about "Nation laid in ruin" for the line?
I liked the heaviness and power I was getting from it. Great flow!
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2006-11-08, 04:33
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: CALIFORNIA
Posts: 134
|
|
yeah i think ill use your suggestion LB,and actually my band is thrash/speed with some punk elements(gang vocals) were going to recrod sometime in the next three months maybe sooner!.Again thanks for the comments 
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Wolfsherz
YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
|
|
|
2006-11-08, 04:48
|
|
Slayer of dumb cunts
|
|
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Virginia Tech, Blacksburg, va
Posts: 3,622
|
|
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Megadeth
yeah i think ill use your suggestion LB,and actually my band is thrash/speed with some punk elements(gang vocals) were going to recrod sometime in the next three months maybe sooner!.Again thanks for the comments |
Sounds almost slayerish.
Sounds cool man, i'll ahve to have a listen sometime.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Darko
...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
|
About requiem. Aint it the truth... |
|
2006-11-08, 11:18
|
|
dsnt trust ne1 < 30
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
|
|
Glad to help out.  Let us hear it if you record it.
__________________
My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
|
|
2006-11-12, 15:10
|
 |
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Hell
Posts: 269
|
|
|
Good job. You're definitely improving.
__________________
CompelledToLacerate because of his sweaty balls and Simpsons dissing.
|
|
2006-11-17, 04:04
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: CALIFORNIA
Posts: 134
|
|
|
thanks ludd and ill be sure to keep you all informed when i record.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Wolfsherz
YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
|
|
|
2006-11-17, 04:20
|
 |
Pirate Lawd
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Hanger 18
Posts: 6,520
|
|
Yeah.... Fuck yeah  |
|
2006-12-08, 00:14
|
 |
Senior Metalhead
Banned
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 140
|
|
|
sounds like megadeth to me
|
|
2006-12-13, 23:40
|
|
Senior Metalhead
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: CALIFORNIA
Posts: 134
|
|
|
Allitle update for everyone im going to start recording this weekend,im not sure when the demo will be ready but ill gladly ship some to anyone who wants them.
__________________
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Wolfsherz
YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
Authorized 