Hey folks,
i tabbed out parts of "the grief prophecy" from dissection some time ago, and wanted to ask if anyone would look at it to tell me i'm not completely off

it's far from complete, and it's written pretty raw & basic... and this is my 2nd attempt at tabbing out something, so excuse me if it is incorrect
also, i don't have a clue about how much pause a space means...

i attached the file, thanx for any feedback

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