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2006-10-29, 22:04
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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I really found the tone of this pleasant. The content was a nice balance of thought and I didn't really have to read it multiple times to grasp it like I have some of yours. That's not necessarily anything about you, but the way I comprehend sometimes.
I can hear this read as a poem, but I also hear it as an open ended piece ending on a hanging note mid-phrase musically.
Nice one. Cool imagery, too.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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