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2006-10-12, 11:49
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New Blood
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Manchester
Posts: 44
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you're along the right lines but at the moment it just sounds like you're doing the lyrics not feeling them, if you know what i mean? try and add some emotion to it
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All research and successful drug policy show that treatment should be increased and law enforcement decreased while abolishing mandatory minimum sentences
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Like cigarettes and gasoline
I light a match and watch this scene
Burn away in front of me
Ashes of my misery
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