Dawn of rebirth in chains
I scream unto the night
The night of unleashing
Of the hollowness within
Like a dead tree sinking in
To the pits of the forest floors
Where death resurrects
Into a form of haunted trees
Impacting the earth around me
I feel fear cave into me
Falling into ashes creating life
Where the need for ventilation
Boils in underneath my skin
Where there’s A darkness
Waiting to come from the ashes
Into control of me

The sky
Bleeds in terror
Falling into the hole
Of the blood moon
Hanging on a rope
Dead inside its flesh
Where it calls us back
To the blood moon

I cant bare it anymore
the cold blood fills my veins
pumping from this stainless soul
plesure and pain coil together
creating this monster from beyond
beyond my vision of undefined death
the black takes over I open my eyes
cracking open the rage within
I kill the innocent and weep for the demon
the aroma of blood filling my nose
I feed on the half alive corpse
there warm blood poures in my mouth
finally setting the human free from me

The sky
cries in terror
Falling down to their kneese
Of the rotting earth
Hanging on a rope
suicidals convicted of death
where they give there souls
To the great blood moon

I will not awaken the truth
I will not sleep away my fears
Death will not agree
with my own, for my life is gone -No Heart

Not bad. I'd say you are getting better over all.

But what the fuck do I know?

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haha, alot if you reconized that, ive been learning how to make my poems flow, it comes out alot better, thanks for the compliment ^.^ Any more comments?