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Old 2006-10-05, 19:45
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Two songs.

I am trying to go for an old school feeling. In the vein of Impetigo, Autopsy, Pungent Stench, and Massacre. So it's ment to be cheesy and what not. Hope you like.


Mission Of Death

The doctor toiles in his lab,
An experiment planed in his warped mind.
He fondles and prepares his equipment.
Hatred in his heart burns for all mankind.
He will create something to destroy them.
The fools they all called him insane.
A creature of increadible horror and terror.
A living abomination with a diseased brain.

LIFE!

It’s dull, yellow eye opens to the world.
His creator belts out a hideous laugh.
A twisted mess of festering decay.
He sends his monster on the attack!
A revolting mass of rotted flesh and goo.
Devoures his it’s prey and gorges their flesh.
So be warned my friend, if you walk alone tonight.
Look out, beware you could be next!

DEATH!


The Ultimate High ( aka NIGHT OFTHE GRAVE FUCKERS)

Two collage students, who play by day.
Out in the night, they stalk their weak prey.
These two sick fucks decide to drop some acid.
Marble is crushed from some tombs once placid.

Voices in the head
Gotta fuck the dead
Echos in the brain
Eat all the remains

Knock a few beers back, knock a few headstones down.
Punch the fucking soil, blaspheme this hollowed ground.
Break through the pine with their fist, find a once living doll.
Smear the pus across their face, and climax in the skull.

Cock in the guts
Cold dead sluts
Suck out the eye
The ultimate high

Next day the news spreads, no one knows who fucked the dead.
But the two jocks know in their minds, that hunger must be satisfiied.
So grab a six pack and let’s cause some pain, let’s do it all over again!
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Old 2006-10-07, 01:25
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i liked mission of death,and the ultimate high was good apart from being pretty fucked up lol
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Old 2006-10-08, 05:03
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I enjoyed both. i could hear them being done by Cryptopsy
 
Old 2006-10-08, 17:42
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I enjoyed both. i could hear them being done by Cryptopsy



HAHAHA I can't! I wanted an Autopsy/Impetigo type cheesy feel. I don't think that's what Cryptopsy is about. HAHAHA
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Old 2006-10-12, 07:04
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I prefered the second set of lyrics as they just flowed a lot easier.

Stucturally, the story itself is very abrupt. You go into detail about the two men getting high etc. but only quickly mention what they do to the corpse before then jumping forward to the next day.

I'm guessing by your name you like Exhumed, look how much detail they go into describing the smell, taste, sight of corpses. In my opinion, if you want comedy/gore lyrics, they have to be extremely over the top.

But whatever, maybe I just like my gore lyrics to be a little more sick than some folk, either that or I just get off on reading detailed accounts of Necrophelia...
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