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Old 2006-09-29, 01:39
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Odor of Sanctity

Odour of Sanctity

I attest
To our
special favor
This detectable aroma
of sex gone sour
the administering substance
Groupthink

state of grace
state of being
sick and dying
manifestations

eminating throughout
this scent of death roses
eminating
stigmata
cannibalism

The broad mass of the nation
blackwhite
bleating
the Home Guard
brutal cartoon thugs
of our perpetual wars

"something huge, terrible and glittering"

state of grace
state of being
sick and dying
manifestations

Pornographic Nationalism

Watching YOU

“The object of power is power; The object of torture is torture.”

Transfer your hatred
To our New Enemy

YOU
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Old 2006-09-29, 02:01
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you are one crazy motherfucker
 
Old 2006-09-29, 02:17
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I'll take that as a complement.
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Old 2006-09-29, 13:03
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It was colorful in a good way. Not a boring account of a common topic. You did well on this. It's ballsy sounding.
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Old 2006-09-29, 13:24
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ludd
Odour of Sanctity

I attest
To our
special favor
This detectable aroma
of sex gone sour
the administering substance
Groupthink

state of grace
state of being
sick and dying
manifestations

eminating throughout
this scent of death roses
eminating
stigmata
cannibalism

The broad mass of the nation
blackwhite
bleating
the Home Guard
brutal cartoon thugs
of our perpetual wars

"something huge, terrible and glittering"

state of grace
state of being
sick and dying
manifestations

Pornographic Nationalism

Watching YOU

“The object of power is power; The object of torture is torture.”

Transfer your hatred
To our New Enemy

YOU


this is one of the first well written lyric sheets ive seen on here, intelligent but still had a lot of feelings in tact
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Old 2006-09-29, 21:47
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Thanks for the positive feedback.

This was inspired by both George Orwell's 1984 and the Catholic obsession with the incorruptible bodies of saints. (Supposedly the really holy ones don't decay when they die and they smell like flowers. Weird.) For some reason I combined these two ideas together.
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Old 2006-09-30, 17:52
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I really liked it, I was drawn to it's intelligent title and was disappointed. I'm listening to the new Decapitated right now, I think a similar musical background would work.
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Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.


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I coated the end of a toothpick with Satan's blood and simply wiped it across the top of an omelet. PERFECT!
 
Old 2006-09-30, 21:17
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I was drawn to it's intelligent title and was disappointed


You liked it, but were disappointed?

I agree with you on the Decapitated style. If only I could play guitar that well. (That's what practice is for.) Hopefully I can make some decent music one of these days.
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Old 2006-10-04, 14:18
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Thanks for the positive feedback.

This was inspired by both George Orwell's 1984 and the Catholic obsession with the incorruptible bodies of saints. (Supposedly the really holy ones don't decay when they die and they smell like flowers. Weird.) For some reason I combined these two ideas together.


1984 is a great book. I loved it when i read it, and yea the whole thing about catholic priests, they actually believe that. Do you think christ smelled good when he died? Probably smelled like blood, not flowers.
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Old 2006-10-04, 14:18
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these lyrics are double plus good!
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Old 2006-10-04, 21:48
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Quote:
double plus good


Unperson thanks Prole blackwhite doublegood duckspeak. Crimethink? Alert BB.
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