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Old 2006-09-26, 03:56
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When circles come to close

When Circles come to close.


How many times will it take?
Lives you'll bend and break
Before this circle comes to a close
You're living in your own mistake

Too busy self realizing
What it would be like
Without the additional misery
Others are forced to endure

The future never seemed so bleak
looking through these fogged lenses
Its as nothing new has become
Of these strides to progress

How many times will it take?
Lives you'll bend and break
Before this circle comes to a close
You're living in your own mistake

Achievements were have naught
And redirections were in vein
You're where you started
Only two years too late

Your wavering resolve tells the story
And yet I've seen this all before
Testaments of young broken spirits
Eventually the anxiety will cease



its probably not finished... But we'll just have to see. I have music set for it, i think. Although i may refine the music, as i like where these lyrics are going.
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Old 2006-09-26, 04:03
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You're a few drafts from some good lyrics. That's better than most.
 
Old 2006-09-26, 04:23
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They sound good to me. What's it about?
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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.
 
Old 2006-09-26, 04:27
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They sound good to me. What's it about?


Whats your interpretation? I tend to enjoy having my own personal interpretations of others lyrics, based on my ... own needs if you will. Dark tranquillity and the Absence definately tend to my needs well.
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Old 2006-09-26, 04:31
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Well, to me, it sounds like you are talking about people's Karma; what goes around comes around, you reep what you sow, etc.
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Old 2006-09-26, 04:34
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Well, to me, it sounds like you are talking about people's Karma; what goes around comes around, you reep what you sow, etc.



Point and case. (Proved exactly what i was talking about with interpretation of lyrics)
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Old 2006-09-26, 04:37
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The thing I've always hated about interperatation, which was more rooted in school and stuff, is the teachers were wanting you to interperate like a poem or something the way it was supposed to be. It just got so frustrating.
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Old 2006-09-26, 14:30
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The thing I've always hated about interperatation, which was more rooted in school and stuff, is the teachers were wanting you to interperate like a poem or something the way it was supposed to be. It just got so frustrating.



I can understand the purpose... for understanding different use of words and metaphors and what not. But.. as i see it in personal reading/enjoying of lyrics its completely dependent upon your own context. Cause unless its for something in particular, what difference does it truly make if you understand it how they created it? It truly doesn't.
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