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2006-09-22, 21:53

fullyautomatic

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yeah its pretty short
but its my first one

You find it hard not to answer,
when it's so easy to stay to ascend.
They call from way down deep,
persuasive evils,
don't answer it.
don't answer it!
don't answer it.
don't answer it!
you answered it.
Now he has you in his arms,
your eyes like a brick wall,
can't see your soul.
You fall down with him,
and we remain with our maker.

2006-09-22, 21:54

Requiem

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whats up with all this emo stuff

2006-09-22, 22:28

CompelledToLacerate

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Still better than mine.

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It's really sad, all those people who don't understand why we shouldn't act like our enemies. The real victory is not only killing and imprisoning the terrorists, but also letting civilized manners override the lust for revenge, once the battle is over.

2006-09-23, 09:33

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I only like the last line.

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2006-09-23, 22:10

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i think it was bad. It was like, now its bad cuz now were in hell.

be more pretentious, poetic, andd descriptive, of ascension, descension, and the final result and something ironic

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2006-09-25, 00:50

fullyautomatic

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alright...
thanks for the insight..
i shall rewrite it & repost!

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