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Old 2006-09-11, 02:01
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Mandalorian Crusade

(Intro)

Verse 1;

From our fleet in space
Through the storming skies
We desend in our Basilisk
Vibroswords and blasters at our sides

Cower if you feel
Hide behind the innocent
Shield yourself
Prepare for oblivion

Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your pathetic front
We are here to slay

For Mandalore!

(Bridge)

Verse 2;

You come at us with all your might
We show our respect by fighting back
Your courage is great, but you lack in strength
That will be your undoing

The frailty is so thick
We cut through it with our swords
Axes and power shields in our hands
A fight to the death is the only way out

That's all I have so far.
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Old 2006-09-11, 22:04
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Are you starting a Star Wars tribute band or something?

Where the hell are the Wookie songs?
 
Old 2006-09-11, 22:06
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.... WOOKIE SONGS! Thanks for the idea

And you're half right about the star wars comment, only we aren't doing it as a tribute to Star Wars..... we just like Star Wars, and we like music. And we're geeks.
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Old 2006-09-11, 22:32
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Pretty cool lyrics, the only thing is im not the biggest star wars fan
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Old 2006-09-12, 00:13
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I was like ok.. i'm going to read this next set of lyrics.. then i read 2 lines and i was like OH GOD HERE WE GO AGAIN....

"Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your pathetic front
We are here to slay"

Thats a cool little paragraph right there.
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Old 2006-09-12, 00:28
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Haha. Just think of it as a rule of thumb; CTL writes Star Wars lyrics.

The big problem I have is trying not to sound too blunt, but it's hard to do. I like being up front with everything because I hate reading (and of course writing) those kind of poetic lyrics that some bands write that I can't comprehend. I'm dense when it comes to poetry and all the symbolism and crapola in it.
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Old 2006-09-12, 01:08
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Jesus fucking Christ! Step away from KOTOR and put your hands in the air.
 
Old 2006-09-12, 01:11
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I haven't played any video games for about a month now.
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Old 2006-09-12, 01:41
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Haha. Just think of it as a rule of thumb; CTL writes Star Wars lyrics.

The big problem I have is trying not to sound too blunt, but it's hard to do. I like being up front with everything because I hate reading (and of course writing) those kind of poetic lyrics that some bands write that I can't comprehend. I'm dense when it comes to poetry and all the symbolism and crapola in it.



I hear that i feel exactly the same way. I think the standard bands i listen to find a happy medium inbetween those, i think i lean (or at least used to trying not to) towards the side of blunt. I dont' write BLUNT lyrics.. but the point of the lyrics to me at least was pretty obvious. I'm trying to use more methods of attempting to get what i'm saying out other than just saying it.

A thing i read on wikipedia said it best.
Melodic Death Metal = "Traditionally, lyrics deal with more expressionist themes"
Expressionist (wikipedia) = "Expressionism is the tendency of an artist to distort reality for an emotional effect. Expressionism is exhibited in many art forms, including painting, literature, film, architecture and music. Additionally, the term often implies emotional angst Ė the number of cheerful expressionist works is relatively small"

If that doesn't describe what i'm trying to do muscially i don't know what does. It basically sums it up perfectly, lyrically and musically. The distortion of reality for emotional effect, emotional angst, and cheeful works relatively small.
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Old 2006-09-12, 02:20
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Old 2006-09-12, 17:13
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Old 2006-09-12, 18:53
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You might as well not worry about being blunt. Actually, a good place to look for what you might want to go for are all those fantasy and Tolkien-inspired lyrics out there; you're basically doing the same thing with a moderately different mythology, so that's not a bad template.

Unless you'd like it not to come out gay.
 
Old 2006-09-13, 00:24
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I repeat: Where the fuck are the Wookie songs?
 
Old 2006-09-13, 00:24
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Old 2006-09-13, 01:33
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Old 2006-09-13, 02:47
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Thanks.


In reference to the wookie songs; my friend just said he wants to cover that one song from clerks. I forget what it is called, but I can only recall one lyric; "CHEWBACCA!"
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Old 2006-09-14, 01:51
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Since you won't do it, I will.
By the way - "The band Supernova performed a song called "Chewbacca" where they proclaim "Whoooa, what a Wookiee!". The song is heard in the movie Clerks."


Kashyyyk Walking Carpets
Rise, oh great Wookie
Jump from your Wroshyr tree
The battle cry is in Shyriiwook

Forever hold your life debt
to the Captain
Rip off the the arms of cheating droids

Head back to Rwookrrorro
for a big fucking wookie party



(Everything I know about wookies I just learned from wikipedia.)
 
Old 2006-09-14, 19:24
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That's awesome, dude!
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Old 2006-09-14, 19:28
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Since you won't do it, I will.
By the way - "The band Supernova performed a song called "Chewbacca" where they proclaim "Whoooa, what a Wookiee!". The song is heard in the movie Clerks."


Kashyyyk Walking Carpets
Rise, oh great Wookie
Jump from your Wroshyr tree
The battle cry is in Shyriiwook

Forever hold your life debt
to the Captain
Rip off the the arms of cheating droids

Head back to Rwookrrorro
for a big fucking wookie party



(Everything I know about wookies I just learned from wikipedia.)


That was cool, but any ways CTL try to make you stuff more interesting,descreptive.I always lose intrest at the very beginning.
 
Old 2006-09-14, 22:07
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try to make you stuff more interesting,descreptive.I always lose intrest at the very beginning.


I agree with him. And add some fucking wookies.
 
Old 2006-09-15, 15:44
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Wookies have nothing to do with the Mandalorians, other than the fact that they are strong and proud, but they aren't conquerors. Play some fucking KOTOR, GAWD.

... sorry, I now and then have a geeky spaz-out now and then.

And Requiem, that's actually what my biggest problem with writing anything is; descriptive language. I have a rather narrow vocabulary compared to some people. What would you suggest?
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Old 2006-09-15, 16:40
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Wookies belong in everything, DAMN IT!

Who cares? It's all a bunch of sci-fi geek crap anyway.
 
Old 2006-09-17, 01:31
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Wookies belong in everything, DAMN IT!

Who cares? It's all a bunch of sci-fi geek crap anyway.

Aw, don't be mad. You just need to play some KOTOR to understand how we think.
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Old 2006-09-17, 02:25
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After you see my lyrics your not going to want to take advice.I think maybe you should try and summize it down to make it shorter.Well are you planing on those to be lyrics for a song?If so thats going to be a long ass song.
 
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I'm not even done with my lyrics for this song, or for the other song. After I get these two essays that I have to write out of the way, I'll finish the lyrics, and post the MIDI files for each song.
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Old 2006-09-17, 02:54
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I'm not even done with my lyrics for this song, or for the other song. After I get these two essays that I have to write out of the way, I'll finish the lyrics, and post the MIDI files for each song.


i look forward to it

Speaking of KOTOR i think im going to go back and beat them again
 
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The first one is better, I think. You understand wht's going on more.
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Old 2006-09-18, 13:38
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(Intro)

Verse 1;

From our fleet in space
Through the storming skies
We desend in our Basilisk
Vibroswords and blasters at our sides

Cower if you feel
Hide behind the innocent
Shield yourself
Prepare for oblivion

Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your pathetic front
We are here to slay

For Mandalore!

(Bridge)

Verse 2;

You come at us with all your might
We show our respect by fighting back
Your courage is great, but you lack in strength
That will be your undoing

The frailty is so thick
We cut through it with our swords
Axes and power shields in our hands
A fight to the death is the only way out

That's all I have so far.


star wars metal lol!
 
Old 2006-09-18, 19:28
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Old 2006-09-18, 21:37
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Wookiecore!

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Wookiecore!

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Characteristics include;

Heavier guitars
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Vocal style is "Chewie growl."
Themes include tree hugging, vine swinging, slavery, hairy backs/faces/balls.
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Old 2006-09-18, 23:47
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HA

This is a style of music I could get behind. I'm going to start a Wookiecore band with a baseball theme and call it "Chewbacca the Rookie".
 
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(Intro)

Verse 1;

From our fleet in space
Through the storming skies
We desend in our Basilisk
Vibroswords and blasters at our sides

Cower if you feel
Hide behind the innocent
Shield yourself
Prepare for oblivion

Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your pathetic front
We are here to slay

For Mandalore!

(Bridge)

Verse 2;

You come at us with all your might
We show our respect by fighting back
Your courage is great, but you lack in strength
That will be your undoing

The frailty is so thick
We cut through it with our swords
Axes and power shields in our hands
A fight to the death is the only way out


Continuing from here...

We validate our exxistance through war
How do YOU find purpose in life?

(Bridge)

Chorus;

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means shit to us
It's in fighting that we find our peak

From our planet Mandalore
We set off into space
The Weak and oppose us all
We put them in their place

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight us if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

We are fighting a crusade
Find the strong, destroy the weak
From Cather to Corusant
We'll make your souls shriek

Bridge: FOR MANDALORE!!!

Verse 3:

The Sith War was a loss for us
We pay it no mind
It was a glorious war that made everyone fear us
The next war would be our time

From the Duxn moon we commanded an armada
We conquered Onderon, Cather, and son the whole Outer Rim
No resistance held us back once our Basilisks rained down
This shitty trend, thankfully, ended

A man, a Jedi, was all it took
He took command of the Core's army and brought the fight to us
This conquest of ours was nothing but child's play
He took this games and made it war

(Chorus)

(Bridge)

(Bass "solo," guitar fill, drum fill)

Interlude:

In the skies of Malachor V
Red and green light blazing about
The stench of carbon and ozone hung
Destroyers and fighters went down in flames

Jedi vs. Mandalorian
Revan Vs. Mandalore
Everyone fought with fury and fists
The Force was irrelevent, this was WAR!

It turned from a battle into a slaughter
All at the hands of one angry Zabrak
He turned to his commander and recieved his order
One click of a button and hell opened up

The war ended in a brutal apocalypse
Jedi and Mandalores butchered by him
Crushed in Malachor's own gravity well
The destruction made it clear that we have lost

(Guitar Solo)

(Bridge)

Victory does not mean fuck to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory does not mean fuck to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory does not mean fuck to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory does not mean fuck to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls!!!

(Outro)

Out Chorus;
We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means shit to us
It's in fighting that we find our peak

From our planet Mandalore
We set off into space
The Weak and oppose us all
We put them in their place

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight us if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

We are fighting a crusade
Find the strong, destroy the weak
From Cather to Corusant
We'll make your souls shriek

Winning isn't why we kill
It's about looking for the good fight
Our heritage will never end
We will return, stronger than ever!

We will never die...

FINISHED!

Here's the MIDI file of the song. Pweeze b nice!
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Old 2006-09-20, 00:09
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Wow dude. Why don't you suck Boba Fett's dick while you're at it?

Heheheheh.
 
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Wow dude. Why don't you suck Boba Fett's dick while you're at it?

Heheheheh.


I tried once theres no getting that armor off.
 
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Wow dude. Why don't you suck Boba Fett's dick while you're at it?

Heheheheh.

Mandalore dick tastes bad. It tastes like the wookies they rape.
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Old 2006-09-20, 02:54
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I only need two new hobbies; fucking and drinking. then I'll be complete.
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Old 2006-09-20, 04:48
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I only need two new hobbies; fucking and drinking. then I'll be complete.



i used to have both of those. Now i'm just stuck with the one. Drinking and thinking about the other.. haha boy does that suck.
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Haha. Well, I have only thinking about fucking with no drinking because I can't stand the taste of beer. I have a sweet tooth; I drink Coca Cola.
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Old 2006-09-20, 06:12
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Haha. Well, I have only thinking about fucking with no drinking because I can't stand the taste of beer. I have a sweet tooth; I drink Coca Cola.



Thats just sad. Wake up get some ballz and drink some cold ones!
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Old 2006-09-20, 14:31
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We keep 'em good and cold so you can't taste 'em too well. It works. Try it.

You should really try to avoid swearing in a Star Wars song. As far as I can tell, all the profanity in that world is made up and vaguely reminiscent of 30's movie substitutions for profanity. In any case, if you're not going to write it as they're written, I don't really see the point to this.
 
Old 2006-09-20, 23:30
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Yeah, that's the point I was trying to make.
 
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We keep 'em good and cold so you can't taste 'em too well. It works. Try it.

You should really try to avoid swearing in a Star Wars song. As far as I can tell, all the profanity in that world is made up and vaguely reminiscent of 30's movie substitutions for profanity. In any case, if you're not going to write it as they're written, I don't really see the point to this.

I know the swearing is a little ridiculous, and it can be immature. But let me ask you this. Which statement would catch your attention a little more?

"The government is corrupted."

"The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned."
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Old 2006-09-21, 00:52
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I know the swearing is a little ridiculous, and it can be immature. But let me ask you this. Which statement would catch your attention a little more?

"The government is corrupted."

"The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned."



To be honest that was a horrible example. For instance kind of brings up something i heard in my philosophy class today. If you want to make an impact with an argument, build up the other side strong and THEN break it down with your opinion and analysis. You completely failed to do that. Like my professor said, is there much impact to building up an argument of straw that you can just blow away? Not really.

Profanity.... to be honest in decient lyrics there isn't ALMOST no place for.. Now i'm saying almost because i think sometimes it can fit. But for the most part its something Slipknot would do, and their lyrics are just seriously horrible. Or any Nu-metal actually. They show their lack of creativity with extensive profane words.
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You have a good point. I'll try to avoid using profanity in my lyrics..... I can use cunt, right? Because I've had ideas for another song, and I'm gonna try to go for a more gorey thing. Trying everything.
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Old 2006-09-21, 02:40
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is there much impact to building up an argument of straw that you can just blow away?


He had a lot of good points. Go back and read what he said again.

As far as profanity goes:

Listen, you shit-eating bitch, there's nothing wrong with fucking cocksucking profanity, you uncle-fucker. But the fuck of it is, asslicker, the less you use, it, the more impact it will have with your reader.

Profanity can be a distraction if it is overused. However, every so often, one could use a specific curse word that will have an impact.

If you see what I mean, you cunt.

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And I agree with that too.
 
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I would never go overboard with swearing. Fuck, it would fucking get so fucking ri-goddamn-diculous and shit, god-fucking-damnit.
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Old 2006-09-21, 08:25
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The statement that would get my attention would, obviously, be "The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned." However, what it would draw my attention to would be the fact that the person making the statement is incapable of any kind of sophisticated expression of his attitude towards the government and has substituted the easy impact of a string of profanities for any genuine passion.

Swearing's easy and usually indicates that you're not taking the time to do this well. And if you're not, and it's voluntary, why do it at all?

tmfreak is also right.
 
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The statement that would get my attention would, obviously, be "The government is a festering pile of maggot shit that needs to be fucking cleaned." However, what it would draw my attention to would be the fact that the person making the statement is incapable of any kind of sophisticated expression of his attitude towards the government and has substituted the easy impact of a string of profanities for any genuine passion.

Swearing's easy and usually indicates that you're not taking the time to do this well. And if you're not, and it's voluntary, why do it at all?

tmfreak is also right.

Mainly because I'm good at the instrumental part of music that I need to work in an area that I'm bad at, but yeah. I'll try to find alternative wordings.

What makes cursing also more convenient is when I'm playing the rhythm in my head, it goes smoother and sounds even with the song when I add like "fuck" or something to a sentence.
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Sorry for digging this old topic back up, but I made some revisions to the song.

(Intro)

Verse 1;

From our fleet in space
Through the storming skies
We descend in our Basilisk
Vibroswords at our sides

Cower if you feel
Hide behind the innocent
Shield yourself
Prepare for oblivion

Nothing you do will stop us
We know battle, we know war
We fly through your front
We are here to slay

For Mandalore!

(Bridge)

Verse 2;

You come at us with all your might
We show our respect by fighting back
Courage is great, but itís strength you lack
That will be your wrack

The frailty is so thick
We cut it with our swords
Axes and shields in our hands
Death is the only way out

We validate our existence through war
What principle in this life do you follow?

(Bridge)

Chorus;

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

Bridge:

FOR MANDALORE!!!

Verse 3:

The Sith War was a loss for us
We pay it no mind
It was a glorious war that made us strong
The next one would be our time

From the Duxn moon we commanded an army
We conquered Onderon, Cathar, the whole Outer Rim
No resistance held us back once our Basilisks rained down
This tedious trend soon ended

A man, a Jedi, was all it took
He took command and brought it on
This conquest of ours was miniscule
He took this game and made it a war

Chorus:

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

(Bridge)

Interlude:

In the skies of Malachor V
Red and green light blazing about
The stench of carbon and ozone hung
Men and women went down in flames

Jedi verses Mandalorian
Both sides crumbling
Everyone fought with dark fury
The Force was extraneous, this was WAR!

From a battle into a slaughter
At the hands of an angry Zabrak
He turned to his leader and received his command
In a matter of nanos we were all damned

The war ended in an apocalypse
Jedi and Mandalores, a tremendous cost
Crushed in Malachor's own gravity well
The destruction was clear; we had lost

(Guitar Solo)

Bridge;

Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls
Victory means naught to us
It is honor and glory from fighting that calls to our souls

Outro;

We are the Mandalorians
Glory is what we seek
Wealth means trifle to us
Itís in war we find our peak

We are the Mandalorians
Honor is what we find
You shouldn't fight if you can't win
Your bones are what we grind

We are fighting a crusade
Find the strong, destroy the weak
From Cathar to Corusant
We'll make your souls shriek

We can never die...
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Do you know what a vibrosword is?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vibrosword
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Old 2007-03-03, 20:53
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CTL, you completely suck the fun out of Star Wars.
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Do you know what a vibrosword is?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vibrosword


Thanks for that link! I've just wasted four/five hours reading about the Star Wars External Universe...
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Old 2007-03-04, 22:21
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It took you 5 hours to read that single article? Or did you just keep clicking and clicking through every link that lead to more articles about Star Wars?
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Well I just read tons of stuff, from the line of the Sith to Kyle Katarn and Dash Rendar (I remember him from years ago on the N64 in Shadows Of The Empire) to the Yuuzhan Vong invasion to a scientific perspective on the Sarlacc... And Boba Fett surviving being swallowed by the one at Carkoon, to the nature, attributes and properties of the Force.

I have to say though, it's really just fan service. Fan service itself being a recognised term a definition for which can be found on Wikipedia.
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Well I just read tons of stuff, from the line of the Sith to Kyle Katarn and Dash Rendar (I remember him from years ago on the N64 in Shadows Of The Empire) to the Yuuzhan Vong invasion to a scientific perspective on the Sarlacc... And Boba Fett surviving being swallowed by the one at Carkoon, to the nature, attributes and properties of the Force.

I have to say though, it's really just fan service. Fan service itself being a recognised term a definition for which can be found on Wikipedia.

Didja like what you see? haha.
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Didja like what you see? haha.


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