feel your legs cripple before you
multiple rounds destroy your shins
pain shoots through your body
destroying all within

try to run
you here his laughter
you cant escape,the war master

an indestructible force
marching as one
conquering nations
by the power of the gun
annihalating the non believers
nukes will blot out the sun
the time for man has run out
their hourglasses are done

try to run
you here his laughter
heed the cry,of the war master

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Not bad. Though I'm starting to wonder why most of your lyrics are about war.

By the way it should be: "you heAR his laughter"

i really dont have much else to write about,and thanks for correcting my spelling error lol

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I actually thought this one wasn't too bad. I didn't like the 2nd line. Getting multiple rounds in the shins. Eh.. just didn't sit with me right. But the rest wasn't too bad.

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