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2006-09-03, 15:02
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
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I think you should extend a little more with some 4 lined verses maybe and make this into song material. I was listening to Harry Nilsson's "Everybody's Talkin' " this morning and this has a feeling like that. Since I know what it's about I think that type mood would fit it just fine.
I really liked it, too. Very laidback and pretty. (just like you.  )
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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