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2006-08-23, 01:15
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Slayer of dumb cunts
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Relive to retell
Why do i see this?
A second glimpse
It was yours wasn't it?
I see your life
Parished years ago
I see you're visions
I feel your wisdom
When will i know?
What are you showing me?
Autonomosly guided
On our pace
We are connected
Lost long ago
Your soul has settled
Vapors of death we breathe
Enhale your reality
This is straight out of my note pad from OCS. I have some much better stuff in my notebook but i left that back at my house... oh well.
I'm in a lyric writing mood, so i'll probably have something fresh by the end of tonight. 
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2006-09-06, 03:27
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whoa this piece is really cool i read over it real quickly like i do to most i see and i thought "meh" now reading back over it i can see how great it is GOOD WORK KEEP POSTING YOUR LYRICS
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YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
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2006-09-06, 03:55
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whoa this piece is really cool i read over it real quickly like i do to most i see and i thought "meh" now reading back over it i can see how great it is GOOD WORK KEEP POSTING YOUR LYRICS
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Thanks i appreciate the 2nd look. Actually i do like this one as it has alot of significant meaning behind it. And when i wrote it i was definately tuned into the subject.
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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2006-09-06, 07:57
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Life is pain.
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Its good, but spelling spelling spelling! And I hate the word vapours... But it's cool man.
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2006-09-06, 16:50
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Originally Posted by Infinity
Its good, but spelling spelling spelling! And I hate the word vapours... But it's cool man.
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Spelling... what are you talking about? hah
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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2006-09-06, 22:23
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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I don't have the faintest idea what he means.
I didn't think this was bad, but I've liked others you've written better. I just didn't get into this one.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-09-07, 00:01
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I don't have the faintest idea what he means.
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Me neither!
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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2006-09-07, 01:05
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Hmm? You better reread what I wrote. 
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-09-07, 03:32
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Hmm? You better reread what I wrote. |
I did and i still don't know! 
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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2006-09-08, 12:36
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  That's all I'm gonna say on that subject.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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