2006-08-19, 01:06
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Whoa! Looked what crawled outta the woodwork!
This was pretty cool. The first verse was a little weirdly worded to me, but maybe I just wasn't getting it. The rest of it had great flow to it. You could do a pretty cool song with some screamer parts in it for sure or maybe even really deep, subtle parts for emphasis.
Nice to see you back around.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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