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Old 2006-08-17, 20:22
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Justice In Empty Halls

You Speak of Freedom you speak of Life
Where are you living? Get back to the real world
The People That are Dying All Dose Deep Wounds
Your Justice Is Justice in Empty Halls

This World of Filth is slowly dying
where are we heading we have lost control
The End of humanity.....Has begun
your Justice is Justice In Empty halls


We have no privilege under The Sun
No one has right to the throne
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Old 2006-08-17, 20:38
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First verse , 3rd line --Dose Deep Wounds. Is Dose the right word?

I fixed a few spelling errors for ya. Hope you don't mind. I liked this. It's got a lot of punch to it and it's got a good rock feel, too.

You Speak of Freedom you speak of Life
Where are you living? Get back to the real world
The People That are Dying All Dose Deep Wounds
Your Justice Is Justice in Empty Halls

This World of Filth is slowly dying
where are we heading we have lost control
The End of humanity.....Has begun
your Justice is Justice In Empty halls


We have no privilege under The Sun
No one has right to the throne
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-08-17, 20:43
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
First verse , 3rd line --Dose Deep Wounds. Is Dose the right word?

I fixed a few spelling errors for ya. Hope you don't mind. I liked this. It's got a lot of punch to it and it's got a good rock feel, too.

You Speak of Freedom you speak of Life
Where are you living? Get back to the real world
The People That are Dying All Dose Deep Wounds
Your Justice Is Justice in Empty Halls

This World of Filth is slowly dying
where are we heading we have lost control
The End of humanity.....Has begun
your Justice is Justice In Empty halls


We have no privilege under The Sun
No one has right to the throne


Okej Thx Very Much =)

I got some Problems With The Spelling but I will work on it =)
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Old 2006-08-17, 23:49
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It's no problem at all. I'm happy to help out. You get your ideas across pretty well so it's not too hard. I'm still helping a Swedish friend I've talked to for about 5 years when he stumbles on an idea or translation. You're doing all right.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-08-18, 09:53
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Okej glad to hear it
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