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Old 2006-08-11, 18:47
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SOAB Blade :)

Doggone it. I tried to retrieve what I wrote before, but mind as well as computer wouldn't let me. I did remember the chorus and part of the verse, but some lines I couldn't remember exactly.
Sort of Pantera sounding.
This was inspired by the quote by Ludd posting a comment about thesadpartofthestory's "The Last Wish." Although the "Vanishing System" seems more appropriate since that's what happened to my piece!!! Oh well....

"SOAB Blade"

"If you yell "I'm coming to kill you!",
I'm going to hear you coming and get out of the way.
If you sneak up on me and whisper in my ear:
"You're dead."
Then I'm fucked." "

Death becomes me
Death confronts me
Death insults me
But you won't see my blade
Death becomes me
Death confronts me
Death insults me
You'll never see my blade

You won't see fear in my eyes
Come closer so I can feel your breath
You think that you can overtake me
But you're closer than you think to your own death
And now you're the one who's fucked

Death becomes me
Death confronts me
Death insults me
But you won't see my blade
Death becomes me
Death confronts me
Death insults me
You'll never see my blade

BJH
8/11/2006
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-08-11, 21:19
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I like this because you quote me in it. Haha.

Actually this is pretty good. I like the chorus too.

But mostly I like it because you quote me. (I can't help it, I'm an egomaniac.)
 
Old 2006-08-11, 21:31
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Nothing wrong with that!
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-08-11, 21:36
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Love The Chorus
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Old 2006-08-11, 21:57
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If you want to use it in the piece it was inspired from go ahead. I'm not doing anything with it. It was just something different. I don't know if it would even work in that or not.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-08-11, 22:42
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Quote:
Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
If you want to use it in the piece it was inspired from go ahead. I'm not doing anything with it. It was just something different. I don't know if it would even work in that or not.



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