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Old 2006-08-10, 20:17
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The Last Wish

Now Things are Youst Flowing!




The Last Wish


I can’t stand their faces, all turned to me like I was some kind of freak,
I don’t want to now, what there are thinking even if I see It in their eyes

And now it’s too late to turn back, now I will make them pay
Now it’s too late to forgive. They cannot dwell

It’s time to kill (yes, yes) It’s time to wield the blade, It’s time to let my anger flow
It’s time to kill (yes, yes) It’s time to wield the blade, It’s time to let my anger flow


My life is a bunch of disgraces, and it will carry on from the early days to the bitter end,
I didn’t now those sides of me, but now I will take advantage of my opportunities


And now it’s too late to turn back, now I will make them pay
Now it’s too late to forgive. They cannot dwell


It’s time to kill (yes, yes) It’s time to wield the blade, It’s time to let my anger flow
It’s time to kill (yes, yes) It’s time to wield the blade, It’s time to let my anger flow
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Old 2006-08-11, 00:41
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I liked the other one better. This one is a little too literal - 'It’s time to kill', etc. Not that there's anything wrong with being blunt, if you want to kill, let me know, just don't be too obvious about it.

Think of it this way - which is more effective?

"I'm going to fucking kill you, now!"

"I have this nice sharp blade in my hand. I want to see your blood covering it."

Personally, I'd be a little more subtle about it.
If you yell "I'm coming to kill you!", I'm going to hear you coming and get out of the way.
If you sneak up on me and whisper in my ear: "You're dead." Then I'm fucked."
 
Old 2006-08-11, 09:20
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Haha Good Point

The Chorus is Something we have Joked about in the band For a wile Our Drummer did always Say Its Time to Kill And Yes yes With High Pitch Growl after hehe
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Old 2006-08-11, 18:20
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"If you yell "I'm coming to kill you!",
I'm going to hear you coming and get out of the way.
If you sneak up on me and whisper in my ear:
"You're dead."
Then I'm fucked." "

uh oh..... I'm inspired.

I don't know. I thought it was pretty killer to me. Sometimes blunt is a good way to be especially in a metal song. This might be a fun piece as a viking metal piece. It could also be folksy. Lots of options.

Like I said you BOTH inspired something so now I'll post it.
Ludd, you had some flow going that I bet you didn't even realize.


Sonovabitch I lost it!!!!!!!!!! I'll try to remember what I wrote. Hells bells.
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