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2006-08-03, 23:54
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Hi! I just read your other piece and thought I'd play around a bit with them. I've done this with some of my own pieces and maybe you'll like this and maybe not.
I'm hearing it pretty heavy musically.
Nova Of The Dead Sky
Nova of the dead sky
Lost in shadows
Crushed by The Light you've never seen
Force to toil, forced to pray
How decides your fate
You never walked your own way
Don't believe in something you don't believe
You have no life
You had one when you came.
The Aftertaste so bitter
We live and die with our fellow man ,
At least we think of it that way
But voicies are unspoken,
Killed at The Altar Of Light.
Unholy knights on blackcrusades,
Guardians of the past
Creators of what's to come
The world implodes in a time of chaos
The remains of your shattered soul were lost long ago
Pain embraces your mind
You are stuck in time......
You can't change the past,
You can't change the future
Watch 'em die
Watch 'em feed
Life is a misery
I'll destroy your life...
Because you are pulling me down
Celebrating the end of the world
Celebrating the end of the world
Celebrating the end of the world
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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So glad you liked it. Maybe that will help you out a bit. It was fun to do even though I didn't do much to it.
