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2006-07-28, 04:42
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Flames Of Hypocrisy
Fruit borne by fertile water
Is the same that is devoured; antediluvian Cannon fodder
The Water of creation to be torn asunder;
Renounce your idiotic blunder-
Now your wound will seethe with fire.
Cast aside your doctrine of hate to quench lustful desire.
The flame of deception treads softly on the oil which constricts the water
And it is with this tinder you keep the flames of your hypocrisy torrid; that you may adore the most delicate of flowers which will perish in the blaze of your abrogation,
The flower to be plucked from a pile of tinder which burns so bright in the flames of your immolation
Fruit borne by fertile water
Is the same that is devoured; antediluvian Cannon fodder
The water of creation will consume its seed;
With the flames of hypocrisy upon my heels, i concede.
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i have to make this gay ass puppet, for mole day or some shit.
i need ideas. so far i got children of moldem and yngwie molesteen.
yes its a gay project, and no im not in special needs class.
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Last edited by IlikeRiffseveryone : 2006-07-28 at 04:59.
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2006-07-28, 04:56
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slack as fuck
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I like this one best out of the two, it flows very nicely. Keep that shit up
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Originally Posted by Soulinsane
Bottle of Vodka, $25
Fucking on the couch while posting on Metaltabs and getting caught by your mother....
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2006-07-28, 12:46
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Pretty cool. Lots of good burning images.
"And it is with this tinder you keep the flames of your hypocrisy torrid"
I like that line.
Is this about a burning Garden of Eden? Or am I just reading that into it?
I've read it three times now and I liked it best the third time.
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2006-07-28, 14:45
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hmm, i think theres definately alot of room for speculation in this one, but i think the only set concept was the flood of the tigris in sumer. Then, the idea of of an oil fire on top of it came along, and it played into the whole "hypocrisy" thing quite well. Most of the other stuff there i just drew from people around me, guess.
Thanks though for comments, guys.
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i have to make this gay ass puppet, for mole day or some shit.
i need ideas. so far i got children of moldem and yngwie molesteen.
yes its a gay project, and no im not in special needs class.
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2006-07-28, 17:42
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Senior Metalhead
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Yeah, I was just going to say something about the Tigris river. Uh...yeah, i swear.
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2006-07-28, 23:45
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haha, maybe you interpreted got the eden thing because of the athiestic mind set and what not? hopefully everything else you've taken a look at you didn't immediately relate to acts of violence against christianity. That would be pretty fucking creepy.
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i have to make this gay ass puppet, for mole day or some shit.
i need ideas. so far i got children of moldem and yngwie molesteen.
yes its a gay project, and no im not in special needs class.
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2006-07-29, 15:46
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Hey, you don't see me running around Norway in corpse paint make up do you?
Then again you never know.
Church burnings are so cliche.
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