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Old 2006-07-26, 13:23
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Life is pain.
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Verses of Mind

Are
You trapped
By
Your mind
I
Confide
Within
Mine

Succeed
To
Realise...

My mind is my best friend
Within you I am mine
You've shown me the dreams
And helped me to deny...

To dream
Is To
Demise...
 
Old 2006-07-26, 14:13
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To tell you the truth, this one-line-one-word style often don't seem to cut it for me; it makes me think of exaggerated brutal growls too. Also, exactly where are you heading with the word "demise"?

Other than that, interesting thought; some good foundation for further contemplation. Some good music to it and it's not impossible that heads may bob.
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Old 2006-07-26, 14:34
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Well I tried to say that trying to follow your dreams will tear you apart because you will fail and torture yourself by trying. Dreams dosn't mean life long goeals either.

If you wanna hear the music I wrote this to the song in the current uploads competetion
 
Old 2006-07-26, 14:36
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And I don't use brutal growls but screams but saying that sounds just as dumb beacuse i cant explain the vocal style and its not brutal at all.

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