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2002-09-08, 12:19
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Master Killer
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Merge for the kill.... my first piece on metaltabs.
I want to fight
To live my own way
So take your evil and
Lie in your grave
Bow down to liars to devils filth
Bow down to wayward fool thieves
Lie down with prostitutes and
Lay down your body and soul
Lie down with broken bones
Lay down your body and soul
Lie down with evil and lie in your grave
Do you want to die forever?
Do you want to die forever?
Or do you want to live?
Bow down to liars to devils filth
Bow down to wayward fool thieves
Lie down with prostitutes and
Lay down your body and soul
Lie down with broken bones
Lay down your body and soul
Lie down with evil and lie in your grave
Do you want to die forever?
Merge for the kill
You will not bend or break my will
That breath your wasting
Should be the air your saving
I think it worked out okay, but the music isn't there yet... the last verse of the song is neat, I've also got it in my signature.
it's kind of an hardcore song, when you look at the lyrics, but who knows how it will end out.
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2002-09-08, 12:20
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Master Killer
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and don't start bitching about the "lie down with prostitutes" part please  |
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2002-09-12, 19:56
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Master Killer
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comments??? anyone?
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2002-09-12, 20:02
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The Devil
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It's pretty good.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2002-09-17, 18:11
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Master Killer
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thanks man, I love this piece myself, especially the last part.
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2002-09-18, 10:47
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its better than lots of the other shit i've seen on here lately.....but its lacking something....but i cant quite put my finger on. but nether the less, its pretty top notch  |
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2002-09-19, 13:50
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Master Killer
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thanks man, I've almost finished another piece but the inspiration comes and goes when it comes to lyrics.
I don't know but somehow I agree with you about the "something missing" statement, I think I don't like the rhymy shit in the beginning.
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