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Old 2006-06-25, 00:45
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Bleak World

I woke up this morning very depressive like, this is what came from it. For me it'ss highly emotionally charged, but technically and as far as how good it is noone else would probably appreciate because it was just done on the spot when I was feeling very very down and bleak. This is just what came of that

Its like the stability I never had
Waking in my head
The walls preventing my collapse
It's heaven in your arms
I'm complete
My soul is rested
Shifting the pain
I feel numb
I feel warm
I feel dazed
How can this be true
I can touch you
I can feel you
I can taste you
I can see you
I can smell you
This is my life
This is the zenith
This is why Im breathless
And sunlight bears the hammers
Crashing down walls
Taking my ideals
I watch you turn away
Taken from my grasp
I never want to wake from this dream
Withdraw the curtains
Withdraw the eylids
I need you
I am totally lost without you
 
Old 2006-06-25, 09:35
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It's pretty cool but there are a few bits that were a bit odd. Like:

"I feel numb
I feel warm
I feel dazed
How can this be true
I can touch you
I can feel you
I can taste you
I can see you
I can smell you"

But yeah i thought it was cool.
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Old 2006-06-26, 20:41
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girl's leaving you mate?
 
Old 2006-06-27, 07:15
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well no its a hard and odd sort of story but if you do want to hear it ill post it but i wasnt sure if you were being sarcastic but basically girl problem lol
 
Old 2006-06-27, 21:14
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If you didn't specifially say it was girl problems it could be taken at another dimension. Since I don't have any girl problems I think I'll take it more in a mental state than a person to person state. It has a Korn feel to me.
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