Three

Millenia of intollerance
just one more god of hate
smash down your idols
smash your ruthless faith
no gods in your skies
no god in your hearts
logic is denied
unto you, let me impart -

That your -

barbarian faiths
will not last
fuck your gods
and days of wrath
fuck your judgement
fuck your pride
the world was better
the day your god died

The big three poisons
enslave the world
buy indulgences
and save your soul
no god in your eyes
no gods in your soul
welcome to this horrid life
embrace your faith, feel the cold

Your barbarian gods
will not last
fuck your faith
and fuck your path
fuck your judgement
and fuck your pride
the world is better
when god dies

Three martyrs,
five thousand years
six crosses
a million tears
Three gods
a single lie
one false prophet
billions die

no gods, no masters
no god, it's all lies
Fanatics go and die
fuck your god, bastards!



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First draft. Excuse any poor wording and the overuse of the F word.

Well, if you are saying yourself that the wording isn't up to what you want it to be then fix it. And as far as the overuse of the "f" word you can try other words to replace that and it will give more imagery to those lines. If the right words are chosen you'll still have the same feeling as using the "f" word, but something additional to it, too.

The form of the piece isn't bad and although it's not a lyric that I like especially the ideas are consistent in it.

I think you just need to polish it up a bit. It's not a bad rough draft.

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It's alright.

But if it was Satanic I would be having words.

Because in the case of that, you are worshipping the god of barbarity and death and are complaining about barbarity and death.
I steer away from anti-religion. It brings out some real bullshit. It's not something I particularly have passion for. There is an anti-religious Meshuggah song on their Destroy Erase Improve album, called Terminal Illusions. The lyrics have a very passionate and narrow feel which makes them horribly incongruent with the rest of their discography's lyrics.

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