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2006-06-10, 03:15
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Senior Metalhead
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Location: Hell
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Wage Slave
Wage Slave
Reduced to the lowest end
scrapping by for crumbs
work yourself to the bone
to poverty you
succumb
to the -
endless drive for
more bullshit
can you see
it's nothingness?
endless drive to survive
your success is all a lie
Work to wage
work to live
work to rage
live to give
to the -
endless drive for
more plastic
can you see
it's just a fix?
endless drive to survive
scraping by until you die
Work to live
Work for wage
all you give
stand and rage!
No more - starvation
No more - desperation
Face our persistence
Fuck their false system
Face our persistence
They don't give a fuck about you!
They don't give a fuck about you!
They don't give a fuck about you!
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2006-06-10, 03:43
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Post-whore
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While in my opinion this could have been written better, I completely agree with the general gist of this lyric. It's straightforward, angry and understandable. I like.
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2006-06-10, 03:47
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Life is pain.
Banned
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2006-06-10, 13:06
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Quantum.
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Not necessarily.
It's been done before. It's being done right now. It will, in all likelyhood be done over and over again. However - I find it worth contemplating, who is the one that should be blamed for it.
Nothing special about the lyrics, but if you really mean it, I guess it says everything that needs to be said.
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Listening to Cannibal Corpse and cutting trees with a chainsaw, now that's metal
"He preferred the hard truth over his dearest illusion. That, is the heart of science."
- Carl Sagan
"Imagination is more important than intelligence" - Einstein
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2006-06-10, 15:31
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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"Nothingness" is gaining ranks with "abyss" and "decay" for me. Just personally getting on my nerves mostly. No biggie.
I do think it could have been worded a bit better in a few places, but yeah, the mood came across very well. Reads like a screamer to me.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-06-10, 15:51
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Senior Metalhead
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I wrote this off the top of my head, so yeah, it could use some work.
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2006-07-16, 04:36
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very cool stuff man good work
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YO DUDES HE PLAYS IN A HxC BAND WITH PITNINJAS, GET 'M!
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2006-07-23, 04:46
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6 lvl 80's sucka.
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real metal doesnt need breakdowns to be heavy enough
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