right, im a drummer, so i dont sing, but i like to write a little, i dont think ita anything special, just want to hear your thoughts on it.

RELEASE/RISE

No image would suffice
Words fail to describe
The unspent, mounting
Rise!

Eternal contemplation
In seamless time
Obsessive conviction
Rise!

Repeal, Reprise, Release, Rise!

Broken glass, knife point terror
Brutal infliction
Stark reality, life ends…
… To the sound of futility
Rise!

Frenzied convulsion
Supreme, definitive execution
Fruition comes to pass
Rise!

Repeal, Reprise, Release, Rise!

Defiantely one of those get you motivated and pissed off songs. Not too bad. Kinda reminds me of boy sets fire, After the Eulogy. Good song.

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