Some Malicious Intent

Desecrate, burned relations
Tainted, bitter taste in my mouth

Anger buried you
Product of angst hate
When will you wake up?
Buried in your grief
Isolate from your past
Stained with the scent of dust
When you preach your ideology
I won't be here

Fractures, strained cohesion
Broken, your will to fight

Forget all you've learned
Faulty reasoning
Where the hell have you gone?
I don't' know you
Trained intolerable
Uncontrollable
You and I
Will never be

You cherish you're failings
Indulge in you're complacencies
Hinder you're own growth
Now fade away and be gone

Now, it's all up to you
No one, can save you from this
Fate, has not damned you
You've, damned yourself

Confusion, clouds you're mind
Drowning, in desperation

You have gone and left
To another state of mind
Out of our reach from helpful hands
Forget what once was
Now you wait for doom
Embellish you're fate
Bask in you're personal glory
I won't be there

You cherish you're failings
Indulge in you're complacencies
Hinder you're own growth
Now fade away and be gone

Some malicious intent

I've been trying to finish this fucking song for months now and its finally done. recording and everything.

I'm sure everybody knows at least one person thats like this, or in my case at least a few. Hardheaded bastards that dont' want to grow up.

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I went to your bandsite to see if this was there to hear it. Get it up there! I listened to the first couple songs and they were pretty good to me.

I thought of this piece on a bigger scale than what you said at the end. I was thinking of a person in leadership that went off on a tangent that was unrealistic and self absorbed. It definitely had a metal feel to it wordingwise. I think there's a lot of room for vocal play with the various parts in it. Let me know if you put it up on your bandsite.

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I'll put it up right now. I actually just recorded the bass too. Woot

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Wow, that was cool! I liked the diversity throughout the piece and yet it was well rounded coming back to the main themes. I followed the lyrics while I listened to it, too.
Very cool piece. Good luck with it!

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I had a bit of a trouble with "you're" where "your" had more to do with it.

I can see myself listening to this in the car. Quite so.

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Yes, definitely agreed there. Its one of those open the windows and crank-er-up songs.

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Thanks for the comments. Yeah i seem to ALWAYS fuck up the your and you're. Not because i dont' know the difference, mostly cause i'm just typing the shit out without thinking about it. But i guess thats with anybody.

What actually sucks ass is i rerecorded another song after finishing this one and ended up saving the adobe file OVER this one..... So basically i have to reload all the damn files back into adobe and reposition them the way they were, and THEN re mix/master it.

Moral of the story, fucking know what folder you're saving your songs in.

(btw correct you're and your in the same sentence.)

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Its started being about one of my friends and just turned into 2 of them. Basically they are angry at everything because they're stuck in their shitty ass town and they dont' want to take personal responsibility and accountability to get themselves out. So they blame everything else and make up excuesses why or how they can't get out. I'm tired of trying to get them out.

Thats it in a nutshell

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That sucks, but if they weren't in that position you wouldn't have a darn good song either. So you benefitted from their self-indulged miseries.

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Alot about that songs sounds like Death (even the singing sounds like it's inspired by Chuck). Those are good things.

Yeah my music definately (alot more lately) has been inspired by Death. I kind of say my music is the mix between Melodic Death Metal and that Death sound. The flow of the music is alot more a melodic death metal/swedish status were as the actually tech riffs and singing probably go more hand in hand with deaths style.

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