Just tried writing a song for the band... Thought I'd post it here and see how bad I did I think it's a bit rushed...


(Verse 1)
We’re cornered by nothin’
But yeah,
I know how you can ignore that.
Cuz if this life, aint just for livin’
Then you’re just waitin’.
And hell,
You know there’s no goin back.

(Bridge)
So listen closely,
When I say
There aint no right or wrong way.

(Verse 2)
Someone once told me
To treasure
Any hapiness you may find.
And that
Its all worthwhile if even
For brief amounts of time...
Time...

(Chorus?)
So my friend it’s up to you
You gotta do
What you gotta do.
My friend now it’s all on you
Wait in line...
Or push through.
There aint no right or wrong way.
Listen closely when I say –
There aint no right or wrong way...

(Verse 3)
May you lose your way
In the dark corners of livin'
Don’t forget
To look past the fog -
For through winter lies spring

(Chorus?)
So my friend it’s up to you
You gotta do
What you gotta do.
My friend now it’s all on you
Wait in line...
Or push through.
There aint no right or wrong way.
Listen closely when I say –
There aint no right or wrong way...



Basic structure, its pretty thrown together... But if I start writing music which i feel fits it will surely take some shape...

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Well, it's a tad cliche in places, but that's not always a bad thing. I think that with a good rock beat maybe ala Skynyrd or something like that you could come up with a good song.
I think my favorite part was --

My friend now it’s all on you
Wait in line...
Or push through.

That grabbed me because I know some folks are waiters and some pushers to accomplish things and it's the pushers' determination that reach the goal quickest.

Cool one.

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Thanks LB

Yeah it is a bit cliche' i guess, but its not too horrible i guess Im gonna try writing a real bluesy/rock tune for it, so you kinda had the same idea as me musically.

Cheers

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