Somewhere outside miles of rain
Someone awaits my journey
Through the blue skies of my own
The smell of morning in the mist
Frozen in mid-air, like liquid spirits
I can feel her smile in the winter
As if she was trying to teach me
Something close to perfection

I wasn’t left inside the corner
Crying until I grow warmer
I attained self discipline
Across the burnt bridges
Reaching for the azure skies

She sings with a light within
Playing the piano elegantly
Each note lights a candle
Inside my cobwebbed soul
Just waiting to be shone upon
Not to rely on something
I still walk the path called life
But to breath air like it was years

They stand with there heads blessed
Down with a critical disappointment
Waiting to be caressed by something better
Better than the demons cries of recruitment
And her I stand eyes full of star lights
Standing alone in my own protection
Dancing in happiness mixed with tears
Inside my own world with the azure skies

In a place where I’ve never gone
Filled with forever dark green forests
And inside the darkness I see gold
A girl standing in a beam of light
Dancing like shed been there forever
Her heart of gold breathed an aura
And she held out a hand with a smile
And we danced forever...
...beneath the azure skies
- No Heart

Very nice. I liked the colorfulness in it and it was romantic and melancholy to me.

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nice one! i liked the ending.

on the line "Filled with forever dark green forests", i was thinking it might be agreeable to make it into "Filled with everdark, green forests", because, you see, in the change the forest is always dark and always green. I could be wrong, but im guessing you were meaning that it was always dark... because that would make the light you found that much more important. but in the way you have it moreso means that the forest is always a dark shade of green, which many actually are. and the sun can still shine daily in a dark shade of green forest. know what i mean? just a thought

Edit: on second though it can still be "forever dark". the important thing is actually the comma. the comma changes it completely. and i just remembered discussing that in english class last semester.

very good imagery. made me think of a situation i was in

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