I was bored so I decided to write something. It's kinda weird and stupid. I've never wrote anything before, because I'm really, really shitty in it. Anyway.


A Question?

Why? The most annoying question a child can ask.
If I explain, you just ask it again.
Why don't you go away and leave me alone?
I don't care if you don't understand.

Suddenly I had this strange feeling.
It's not that I would feel sorry for it.

Once I saw this dream where I was trapped in cage.
Suddenly I woke up and I see that I'm still here.
Just walking there, trying to find something.
Suddenly I start hearing some weird voices.

Is this it? The final of my mind?
Or is it just the retardet sound of my guitar?

There is still a shit-load of things for me to do.
There is still a lot of places I must see.
I just don't wan't to go.


(guitar solo^^)


I hear someone singing this shitty song.
What is this story about? Why can't I find the reason.

Oh, I wish I was a little mosquito.
No questions or anything to think about.

I try not to notice it, but I can't avoid hearing it.
On the other hand, what is the thing keeping me here?
Maybe I should go?

Once I saw a dead bird falling in front of my eyes.
I touched it and I saw my fingers painted in blood.
The view in my eyes passed silently by.
Everything just for one innocent question.

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Well, it was different. I think the first thing I'd do is put the similar ideas together somewhat so they flow a little better. I can even see this being a couple different pieces instead of all one. I liked the little mysteries in it. It's got some good form to it and the imagery is pretty neat.

Although sometimes it can get on one's nerves, kids and adults both learn by asking why.

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You'll get better if you keep at it and start really exercising your imagination and absorbing ideas. This is a writer of nearly two years experience telling you.

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This is definately my case. Alot of times my best pieces were probably the ones that i felt i HAD to write a song about a certain topic at the moment. This piece was an intresting read, just because of the forward style of it.

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Yep, a friend just sent me a beautiful painting he did recently. He said he hadn't picked up a brush to do anything for a couple years, but he felt like doing it because it's a really good friend's birthday. When the muse strikes go with the flow.

And yeah, keep at it. You'll get better.

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Well, this song tells about a person who has a child and the person is leaving. (haven't decided why) And that child keeps asking why he/she is leaving and then the person starts think to why he/she should and why shoudn't leave. Thanks for your comment. I appreciate it.




Thanks. I'll try to keep writing.




Thanks.

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Knowing that little tidbit of information about why the "Why" is there makes the whole piece come together better. That's one of the nice things about being able to talk to the author. Thanks for the info.

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